Tuesday, November 12, 2013

NaNoWriMo Day 12

Here it is Day 12 and I am just over halfway to the finish line with 26,866 words done. My novel is taking shape and getting interesting, well more than it has.  Another excerpt for you:


“I know that I also know she has a tough choice to make very soon. Her first heat is upon her.”
“She knows?”
“Yes we have talked about it. Now it is up to her to decide what she will do.” Zared explained hoping it would let Azri know that since he gave up his claim he had no say in what she does.
“I see, and I suppose you offered to help her through it?”
“No, she asked if I would if she chose that route.”
Azri was shocked by the look on his face. “She asked, even after all she’s been through? You know she may never be able to carry.”
Wow, Zared thought. Azri was really trying to keep him from being with Tasmina. “It is her choice and I will accept it no matter if she chooses to be alone or another male. You gave up your claim. She could rightfully be yours if you hadn’t. Now you say things that would have a male rethinking about her request? What the hell gives you the right?”
“ENOUGH!” Someone shouted. Turning they saw it was Eldest. Crap they were in trouble now.
“Eldest.”
“Yes, it is I. What is going on in here?”
“Azri was trying to keep me from Tasmina.” Zared stated.
“I see, Azri you have no claim. You refused it. Zared has every right to be around the pup.”
“She has asked him to mount her during her first heat.”
“That is her choice, Azri.”
“Yes, of course, Eldest.” Azri stated.

Males are always causing trouble with the order of things, even in real life here in Iowa. 

About Tasmina, she has a horrible past. Not much different than my own. Which is making this novel rough to write. Somethings are just hard to deal with and writing them out is harder. I have learned a lot about myself as I write of Tasmina's life. 
Now, working through plot twist 1, thinking maybe a total of 3. That is if Tasmina lets it happen. She has already had me make changes to what I intended. Yes I do not know what I will write, my characters have a tendency to take over the story.

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