Today I was organizing my Scrivener files and making sure they were all named by the MC (Main Character). I didn't realize I had so many started and not past the first few chapters. SO, being OCD I decided I will NOT start another one until I finish half of them. I do have 2 I'm editing, which means they are written but need some TLC. You can see them all in the photo here. It's my Scrivener files.
I'm hoping my brain will do as I want it to. It keeps jumping in with new story lines and characters. I guess that's part of being extreme rapid cycling bipolar disorder.
Once I put all my WIP into Aeon Tmeline 2, I found the gaps. That made me even more determined to finish them. I love that I can nest every event in each WIP, I can see where the gaps are. I can open them all and see where I need more stories at the bottom and top.
With taking my max dose of meds and staying inside so I don't have issues with my neighbors; I should have plenty of time after all my appointments. I may not like being forced to stay inside due to my anxiety and bipolar but it doe seem to get me writing and the house clean.
Excerpt of New WIP (Work in Progress).
Remember it is the 1st draft.
Morgan was running through the woods as fast as she could carrying her young. She knew they were coming for her, to take the baby away and impregnate her again. They were using females as breeders and sending the young off. After weeks of planner she finally escaped with a few other females, though she hadn’t seen any of them for days. Another branch smacked her in the face while holding the little one as close to her body as she could. Stopping near a small stream Morgan inhaled trying to smell if they were still following her and if so how close. Signing in relief, Morgan walked to the edge of the water. Setting the little one down on soft sandy bank, she drank the water as fast as she could. Not knowing when it’ll be available again.
© 2016 Jessica Markley
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Saturday, July 30, 2016
Monday, June 27, 2016
It's Time to Meet Naleena
Naleena is in for a major change. Here is the beginning.
Packing the final bag, Naleena’s excitement increased. Finally after weeks of arguing she’s leaving for Chicago to see her baby brother. Council, the three ruling males of all shifters tried to stop her but they had finally given in two days ago. She knew it was because her best friend, Dalara, a special wolf, had been kidnapped. Dalara was known as The Recessive to all shifters. She is coveted and has immense power. After she came back Council had insisted on everyone moving into pack houses of the Alpha house. That meant everyone living on Dalara’s property. Naleena had been raised to think she was human. That had all changed when Dalara learned she was not human either. It had taken time to get her mind to believe in all the supernatural stuff. Even now her feelings for Takoda, her Beta and sorta boyfriend, were all over the place. Yes she had liked him fr a few years but they had only started dating a few days before she learned of everything. Nothing had been the same between them. Yes, they went out about once a week but that was it. Something between them had changed when Council insinuated they were to be married, mated. This trip was to get away from it all and to relax. Naleena had traveled all over the country the last few months checking in on all the North American packs.
Zipping the bag, Naleena walked down the stairs to the front door. Though she didn’t get far when Dalara stopped her.
“Sneaking away huh?”
“I just want out.” She knew Dalara understood.
“I know. Drive safe and come back quick.” With a hug she let Naleena leave.
The six hour drive was long but gave Naleena time to think. She had to keep what she was secret from her brother. Council said he wasn’t to know any of it. Again she tried to tell them he wouldn’t say anything. In the end she gave in to their order. It might not be too hard. She had figure out what to say about her work. The work she was now doing for Council, translating very old Latin to current English and traveling. Just so he doesn’t ask what she does when she travel. That wasn’t going to be an easy answer.
Sooner than she thought she was pulling up to her brother’s new apartment building. Tristan must have been watching since he was at her door as she turned off the car.
“Wow! Where’d you get this beauty?”
“New job, more money.”
He grabbed her bags as soon as she popped the trunk. She followed him up two flights of stairs . When Naleena walked in she found the place spacious and clean. Something that was unusual. Tristan had always had tiny one room apartments. “How can you afford this place?”
“I took a second job.” He turned and smiled, “Don’t worry I aced all my classes.”
“Good. Did you tell mom you moved?”
“Yes, and heard how I need to settle down, stay with a job and find a nice girl to give her move grand-babies.”
“She never stops. I hear I’m getting to old not to be married and have three kids.”
They both laughed. Their sister married right out of high school and has two kids. Their mother thought they all should have but college was more important to them than families. Tristan was almost done with his PhD in, of all things, Biochemistry with a minor in zoology.
“You’re done in December, right?”
“No, I’m done now. I just want to take Advanced Latin.”
“You never told me you took Latin. Why the hell did you keep it from me?”
“You’d say I took it because you did.”
“No. I like the idea.” Now only if he was wolf. It would make her job easier to have him help her.
“So lunch is pizza down the block.”
Silence was not a norm for them but as they walked they didn’t speak. She was getting used to scenting feelings and Tristan was nervous.
They ordered their pizza and she finally had enough. “What’s wrong Tristan? You’re too quiet.”
“Well, umm… it’s about your job.”
“What about it?”
“You’ve never told me what your doing.”
“Oh, well I’m translating books right now.”
“And the traveling?”
“Well, I check on rentals for my bosses. They have hundreds all over the country.”
“OH! I thought with that new car it was drug dealers you were working for.” A shy smile told her that he was feeling stupid to think that.
“NO, nothing illegal, I promise.”
Something caught her attention as the door closed. She looked and it was a man, no not a man a male. Sage had told her there was only one in Chicago and it was a female. The hairs on her neck were stand up and she got the chills. There was nothing she could really do without Tristan jumping in with more questions.
“What are you looking at?”
“Oh I thought I knew that guy.” She nodded over to the male.
“You saw him when we went upstairs. He lives across the hall. Just moved in. I think his name is Jim. He asked about you when I said I was waiting for you. I couldn’t remember the name of the town but told him you lived in southern Illinois.”
Naleena gasped. If someone was asking about her, they knew she was Sage’s. Why would he moved in just before she came up here, across the hall no less. He’d be able to hear everything.
“Are you okay sis?”
“Yeah, I’m just tired from driving. Would you mind if we called it a day?”
“It’s only two, but yeah. I rented movies and made sure I have plenty of popcorn.”
“That sounds great.” As they headed out the male waved to Tristan, but he stared at Naleena like he was pissed or something. She needed to talk to Sage or Council. This didn’t seem right. Knowing she needed to be away from the male to call when they got back to the apartment she went into the bathroom, locked the door, turned on the water and called Sage. She got voice-mail. Calling Drewdon he answered on the first ring. Damn precognition.
“Naleena, what is the trouble you have found yourself in already?”
“Drewdon, I can’t talk long. Sage said there is only a female here but a male moved across the hall from Tristan and was asking about me. He made me uneasy when we were at the pizza place.”
“No male should be there. Sage would have told you.”
“Maybe you were right and I shouldn’t have come.”
“Why do you feel that way?”
“I don’t know. I feel something bad is gonna happen.”
“Don’t worry, Sampson is just a few blocks from you.”
“What? You sent him after me, after you said I could go alone?”
“Amos is still out there. You are close to Council. I could not let you go alone. Sampson was to keep his distance and just watch over you.”
“Well, he should have seen the male then.”
“I shall call him. I will call you back.” Click.
Naleena knew she was going to be sent home. Splashing water on her face she went to watch movies. She couldn’t follow anything that was going on in the movie, she didn’t even know the first one was over until Tristan broke through her thoughts.
“What ya want to watch next? I’ve got Twilight and some horror flick the girl said was great.”
“Twilight.” Her voice sounded off and distant but Tristan had never learned to pick up on that.
Her phone rang making her jump. “It my boss, I’m gonna take it in the bathroom.”
Tristan gave her a strange look but said nothing.
“Drewdon.” Once the water was on she felt better.
“Sampson says it is not a male he knows. I would feel better if you moved to Council’s penthouse suite that Sampson is at.”
“And what am I supposed to tell Tristan?”
“That Sampson is your male and he surprised you.”
“No, Tristan knows about Takoda and me.”
“Then say he works with you and offered to share the suite.”
“Fine, whatever, I’ll think of something.”
“He will be there in moments. Do as he says.” Click. Naleena had always hated the fact Council never said bye but just hung up.
Now all she had to do was make up a story her brother would believe. Taking a deep breath she went to tell Tristan.
“Sis, what’s gong on? You’ve been distracted. Who was on the phone?
©2016 Jessica Markley
Wednesday, June 22, 2016
Dalara Excerpt
Dalara Excerpt
Here is a another look at my WIP (work in progress) Dalara! Hope you enjoy it.Chapter 4
Sage walked into the room, pulling Dalara from her thoughts.“Do you feel better now that you showered?” she asked him.
“Yes, thank you for letting me use shower.”
“I need to apologize to you. Last night you made you uncomfortable when I asked you to take my clothes off. I am sorry. I shouldn’t have put you into that situation. Especially after you were caring for me when you didn’t need to.”
“You didn’t.”
“I might have seemed out of it at the time but I wasn’t. I know that you felt it was wrong.” She said.
“Please Dalara, don’t worry about it.” Sage said wishing this topic was over. “Why don’t we get down to business?” Hoping that would change the subject.
“Alright.”
“I will have to make a business call here soon, but we should be able to get everything worked out and signed today.” Sage told her leaving it open to when he could call Zane.
“I have never done this before, how does it work? What do I need to do?”” Dalara asked.
Sage sat down with her at the dining room table and pulled out a stack of papers. “First, I looked everything over and making phone calls, it’s going to run about one hundred twenty thousand give or take a thousand. Zared still needs to measure the upper porch.”
“Ok, that’s fine.” She told him.
“No haggling or trying to get a cheaper price?” Sage was shocked. Everyone he had dealt with in the past had tried to get it done cheaper.
“Nope, when can you start? I know the weather is a factor.”
“We can start on the inside as soon as tomorrow. The outside will depend on the weather.”
“Oh! I thought it would be at least a month to get it going.” Dalara stated excitedly.
“It’s because you had a lot of the things done. I also had a thought about the upstairs. Do you ever plan on having this place open as a bed and breakfast?”
“I really haven’t thought about it, why?”
“If you do, you might like a kitchenette and a small laundry area at the end of the halls rather than more storage.”
“Wow, I would have never thought of that. What made you?” Dalara was even more interested in what else Sage may think about doing.
“Well, I have friends that live in large houses and always have guests. They ended up adding them to their houses a few years back.”
“I’m glad you’re doing this. You’re great with the suggestions. Do you have any more?”
“Yes, I thought that the bedrooms down here should share a joining bathroom rather than have to walk across the hall. It would be more private with just the two rooms sharing. Then we could make the one across the hall a half bath.”
Sage’s phone rang at the same time Dalara’s did. “I need to take this outside. I’ll be back when I’m finished.”
“Ok, it’s Naleena.”
Sage stepped outside the door and answered it as he made sure Dalara was on the phone with her friend.
“Hello Alpha Zane.” He said.
“Sage, I thought you would have called by now.”
“About what Alpha?”
“The female, Takoda and Zared have both called concerned. What is going on Young One?” Zane asked.
“I don’t know and for the record I was going to call when the female was on the phone with her friend. That way she would be distracted.”
“Fine, explain why I am receiving calls from your pack.” Zane ordered.
©2016 Jessica Markley
Monday, June 20, 2016
Dalara
Introduction to Dalara
Creation
In 4779bc six shifters were created; they could take any form. Wolf, leopard and panther were the ones they preferred. When they bred they had whatever species they were at the time of conception. Nathaniel, Vera, James, Abraham, Lorily, and Margret were their names. The Firsts could take any mammal form. Nathaniel lived the longest and was the most powerful of the six. As the race expanded they became ‘Council’, the ruling govern. They made laws and punished those who broke them, usually physical punishment. Numbers have dropped and new wolves are not coming. Many abilities were lost since humans population increased rapidly.
Over the years powers and abilities have disappeared. Zacharius is the only one left with all but ‘True-Mate’ Sensing.
©2016 Jessica Markley
©2016 Jessica Markley
Monday, April 13, 2015
***Day 13 of CampNaNoWriMo April 2015***
I am making slow progress with my CampNaNoWriMo 2015 project. Several things have come up and distracted me. The main distraction is having to write on my desktop since my laptop died over the weekend.
I am still a day and a half ahead of schedule. Though I wanted to finish by the 25th. I might not be able to.
I thought you might like an excerpt from my #WIP.
Tasmina
Tasmina had been left with Vance while Azmera tossed together a meal. Vance was silent and that had made Tasmina feel comfortable enough to sleep. Her dreams were filled with Amos. He was beating her and telling her he’d kill her given the chance. When she flung out of bed trying to escape her dream, she saw that Elijah had replaced Vance. Why hadn’t his scent calmed her. Vance was new to her wolf but she knew Elijah would never let Amos get her. To the point she was certain about it.
“You are safe little one.”
She crawled back into bed. “Amos?”
“Executed. You do not have to worry about him. Is he one you were dreaming about?”
Nodding since her tongue was tied from fear that lingered. Swallowing the lump in her throat, “Yes.”
“I must speak of another matter at hand.” She looked to the floor. He fall back mode. “Amos spoke of others coming for you. Stated they were to start with you. Do not fear Council has it safe for you. More warriors are coming. Council thinks it best you stay here. Your scent is all over Sage’s territory, but very little here. If you stay inside none shall know you are here.”
“School?”
Elijah felt the wave of sadness coming from her. “You can still do your school here. You will no longer be allowed to the school until this is settled.”
“Why me? I can’t hurt anyone.” Tears were flowing down her cheeks. She no longer cared if she seemed weak to anyone.
“He called you a traitor.”
“Why? All I did was run from him.”
“You ran to Council. That can be seen as a betrayal to an Alpha. I know you did what you had to. Council feels the same. Zane would not have given you to Sage if not. Can you tell me what Amos did to you?”
“Must I?”
“No, I would like to know at some point.”
“He whipped me for everything. If I walked to slow or too fast. If I ate the wrong way according to him. I was pushed and beat on by everyone, even the females at times.” She was shaking with the memories but continued, “I was forced to…” and she couldn’t continue any longer.
“Forced? Forced to do what?”
She looked to he waist and then to his. “They took you? They forced you when you were so young?” His tone was angered. For the first time Tasmina saw his powers and control over them. He didn’t move but just sat there clenching his fists repeatedly. His power was intense, it was driving he to hide but she sat there waiting for him to ask again and give details. The questions never came. Elijah just sat there at the door in silence.
There I hope you like it!
Have a great day ad keep writing and reading.
I am still a day and a half ahead of schedule. Though I wanted to finish by the 25th. I might not be able to.
I thought you might like an excerpt from my #WIP.
Tasmina
Tasmina had been left with Vance while Azmera tossed together a meal. Vance was silent and that had made Tasmina feel comfortable enough to sleep. Her dreams were filled with Amos. He was beating her and telling her he’d kill her given the chance. When she flung out of bed trying to escape her dream, she saw that Elijah had replaced Vance. Why hadn’t his scent calmed her. Vance was new to her wolf but she knew Elijah would never let Amos get her. To the point she was certain about it.
“You are safe little one.”
She crawled back into bed. “Amos?”
“Executed. You do not have to worry about him. Is he one you were dreaming about?”
Nodding since her tongue was tied from fear that lingered. Swallowing the lump in her throat, “Yes.”
“I must speak of another matter at hand.” She looked to the floor. He fall back mode. “Amos spoke of others coming for you. Stated they were to start with you. Do not fear Council has it safe for you. More warriors are coming. Council thinks it best you stay here. Your scent is all over Sage’s territory, but very little here. If you stay inside none shall know you are here.”
“School?”
Elijah felt the wave of sadness coming from her. “You can still do your school here. You will no longer be allowed to the school until this is settled.”
“Why me? I can’t hurt anyone.” Tears were flowing down her cheeks. She no longer cared if she seemed weak to anyone.
“He called you a traitor.”
“Why? All I did was run from him.”
“You ran to Council. That can be seen as a betrayal to an Alpha. I know you did what you had to. Council feels the same. Zane would not have given you to Sage if not. Can you tell me what Amos did to you?”
“Must I?”
“No, I would like to know at some point.”
“He whipped me for everything. If I walked to slow or too fast. If I ate the wrong way according to him. I was pushed and beat on by everyone, even the females at times.” She was shaking with the memories but continued, “I was forced to…” and she couldn’t continue any longer.
“Forced? Forced to do what?”
She looked to he waist and then to his. “They took you? They forced you when you were so young?” His tone was angered. For the first time Tasmina saw his powers and control over them. He didn’t move but just sat there clenching his fists repeatedly. His power was intense, it was driving he to hide but she sat there waiting for him to ask again and give details. The questions never came. Elijah just sat there at the door in silence.
There I hope you like it!
Have a great day ad keep writing and reading.
Wednesday, December 24, 2014
What Am I Doing On Christmas Eve?
We don't celebrate Christmas in our house so I'm making cheesecakes for my friends' holiday celebrations. I've cleaned the living room, did dishes, swept floors and dusted. Then my ex-boyfriend messages me on facebook. He's in an emotional tornado and wants my help. Guess what I agree to. I have him coming over to talk. How stupid can I be. The only time we talk is when he is having problems. If I had a doctorate I'd be getting paid tons of money for this. Why do I always help him and a few others like him? Is it because I know I can or is it a deep seated wishing I had a boyfriend? I have learned from mistakes that I do NOT need a man to have a fulfilled life. My mom thought she needed to stay with an abusive man to be happy. It tore her heart out in the end. I knew then I would never need a man. I still ended up in a few relationships that were just for companionship. Guess some of us have to learn from experience.
Well, my ex is coming over and I will talk with him. I'll remember all the reasons why we are no longer together and forbid myself to get attached again.
I'm going to spend the next week looking at my mistakes and triumphs to better understand myself. I need to lose weight, eat better and get a handle on my emotions before I fall apart. My resolution for 2015 will be:
Take meds every day(I do it now)
Exercise
Write
Read
Cook healthy meals
Not look out the window and wonder if the grass is greener on the other side
Talk to my kids rather than speak at them
These should help me with all my issues.
Look for excerpts after the new year. I promise you ate least one.
Happy Holidays!
Well, my ex is coming over and I will talk with him. I'll remember all the reasons why we are no longer together and forbid myself to get attached again.
I'm going to spend the next week looking at my mistakes and triumphs to better understand myself. I need to lose weight, eat better and get a handle on my emotions before I fall apart. My resolution for 2015 will be:
Take meds every day(I do it now)
Exercise
Write
Read
Cook healthy meals
Not look out the window and wonder if the grass is greener on the other side
Talk to my kids rather than speak at them
These should help me with all my issues.
Look for excerpts after the new year. I promise you ate least one.
Happy Holidays!
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