As promised here is the synopsis and an excerpt of WIP-Dalara. I how you enjoy it.
DALARA:
A teacher lost her Grams and decided to purchase a home her Grams had talked about all the time. It was falling down and Dalara had trouble finding a contractor to do the work. Along come a man that she had never really noticed, even though the town was less than 1000 people. That's the turn in her life that she would never had guessed would come.
She found that she wasn't human but wolf and the change of worlds turned her life upside-down.
EXCERPT:
“I don’t know what came over me. I've never done that before.” She admitted.
“Done what?”
“Umm… taken control.”
“You seemed to know what you wanted and you took it. I will never complain about that. I love you my mate.”
“I love you too.”
Cuddling Dalara finally thought about everything she had tracked that she wanted to ask Sage about.
“Can we talk?”
“Of course my mate.” He brushed her hair away from her face making her smile.
“Well, I have some questions.”
“I sensed you did.”
“I just hate to ruin this feeling. You know relaxed and warm all over, inside and out.”
“It won’t I promise. I won’t let you go any where.”
“Okay, I was wondering why you got so pissed when Eljin wanted to examine me.”
“You have to understand, males hate it when their mates are seen unclothed by other males. It’s ingrained in us to keep that from happening.”
“So you’d rather I have trouble with carrying than be seen?”
“No! I would not. It’s the thought of him seeing you down there, that’s all.”
“Whoever delivers this pup will see down there any way. I think Eljin will be that one. You need to get over it, at least with him.”
“You are right. I hope I didn't trouble you with my snapping at him.”
“No, just please let him look after me and the pup.”
“As you wish, though it might be tough to control. I think I will have Elizabet with you instead of me when he examines you. I don’t think I could control my jealousy.”
“Fine.”
Sage was rubbing her arm that was on top of the comforter trying to understand why Dalara was so worried about have to doctor look at her. “Love, why is it important you have a doctor? I mean wolves have been whelping without them for years.”
“I was raised human and they have babies in hospitals you know with drugs.”
“You’re worried you can’t handle it aren't you?”
“Yes.”
“You can do it I know you can. You are an unbelievable female that has comes to terms with your new life. You amaze me every day. Like today, you got through the interviews and it seems to name you picked the ones that will fit good.”
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Tuesday, January 28, 2014
Saturday, May 25, 2013
'Inevitable Destinyz' Excerpt
'Inevitable Destinyz'
coming soon
Chapter 11 coming soon
Brina really needed to think about everything more carefully and figure out what was going on. She kept walking, looking at the trees and listening to the noises from the animals. It was peaceful out here she thought. After a ways she found a bench and sat down. Thinking, it started with the hike with the group Monday. Well when he touched my arm as he caught her so she wouldn’t fall. That was when she first felt the warm feeling all over.
She remembered she had probed then and got from him lust. Why was he feeling that way? He didn’t even know her. Maybe because he thought I was good looking and wanted me physically, I don’t understand that but I’ll go with it. Then there’s the way we were looking into each others eyes, I can’t even remember how long we did. Then at dinner when he linked with me, I was feeling…excited he wanted to meet me and a bit scared. Why? Oh Goddess, help me understand. Why did I feel scared last night when he tried to link? I’m powerful, more so than vampires when it comes to magiks. Then the shy feeling is strange too. The scariest thing though is passing out. I remember hyperventilating, he let go of me and that was when he had said I passed out. I have never passed out, why then?
What do I know for sure? He’s a vampire. He never hurt me and offered to bring me back when he thought I was scared. He did bring me back when I wanted to leave. Then there is the attempt of linking when I was asleep. He said he never did it unless he knew it was ok so it couldn’t have been him. He respected me with linking and even told me he was sorry for doing it at dinner. He hasn’t tried to talk to me or link today like I told him. Ok time to find out if he was the one trying to link last night.
“Kendreague” She had never tried it over much distance and didn’t know if he would hear.
Then she heard telepathically, “Brina is that you?” It was Kendreague for sure.
“Yes.” Was all she said. Let him lead the conversation she thought.
“What do you want? I thought you didn’t want to talk to me.” he asked.
“I need you to answer a question for me if you will? That’s all.”
“Yes if I have the answer.”
Brina took a deep breath before asking, “Last couple of nights after I was sleeping it felt like someone was mind link with me, was that you?”
“You told me not to. Why would I? My answer is no, I didn’t. Now is that all you wanted?” he answered, a bit frustrated and cold. Brina thought, no that’s not all but I don’t want to talk to him any longer.
But her mind took over and answered, “Yes and no.”
“I’m confused. What does that mean?” he replied. She didn’t answer right away because she didn’t really know herself. She got up off the bench and started walking, making sure she was blocking her mind. What did I mean? She didn’t know. That was when it happened, she was too busy in her mind to watch what she was doing and tripped. When she fell she was falling over a small embankment. She yelled and screamed mentally not remembering she was linked to Kendreague.
“What’s happening? What’s wrong Brina? Where are you?” Kendreague was frantic.
Brina sent him a picture of where she was since she wouldn’t tell him exactly where she had fallen to. She slowed her breathing down and that was when she realized her arm was bleeding terribly.
“I’m coming. Hang on Brina.” Kendreague told her and broke the link.
Saturday, March 2, 2013
Snippet!
From "Inevitable Destinyz"
Chapter
59
Chapter
59
“Alexia we need to get to the gate. Josie and Matthan are
here.” Edan told Alexia. They went straight to the gate and sure enough they
were there waiting.
“Lexi, tell this idiot to let me in.” Josie told her.
“Sid is not an idiot.”
“Thank you Mother. These two say they are to be here but
they are not on the CC.”
“Sid that would be my fault, Alexia told me to add that they
were coming today and I forgot.” Edan told him.
“Your highness, I’m sorry I did not mean to be so rude. I
will need their social security numbers and run them before I can let them
passed my office.”
“I understand Sid. You’re doing a good job. We’ll wait with
them.” Alexia told him.
“Lexi, what’s going on? What did he call you?”
“Yeah, she isn’t is she?” Matthan asked Edan.
“Edan, it’s ok, Brina said I could tell Josie but the same
rules apply for when we all left camp.” Alexia told him.
“Ok, here goes. Josie, Edan is a vampire and now I am too.
There are witches here and I’m getting married on Sunday to Edan.”
“You changed her you idiot. I knew this was bad when you
told me to come.” Matthan said.
“Stop that now.” Edan commanded.
“You can’t tell me what I can and can’t do Edan.” Matthan
said.
“Oh I can and I will. I’m one of the fourteen you idiot.
Kendreague is the damn prince.” Matthan just stared and dropped his head. He
knew a punishment was called for. “Matthan, I’m not going to punish you. Just
stop so we can explain to Josie here.” Matthan nodded.
“Lexi, tell me what’s going on. Why is he so powerful and
what is with the prince and all that about?” Josie was really confused now, or
at least she acted as if she was. Edan
explained about the witches and vampires and then about the prediction. Alexia
told her about Brina’s prediction too.
“You’re going to have a baby with a vampire?” Josie asked.
“Yes and I’m a vampire too if you remember.”
“Edan, may I speak your highness?” Matthan was acting as he
should have in the beginning.
“Please you don’t have to be like that. You are my best
friend and I wanted you here to be a participant in my handfasting to Alexia.”
“Your highness I can’t do that. You changed her and are
handfasting with a former human. I can’t and I won’t. I’ll kill her if I get
the chance.” Edan was at a loss. He never thought his best friend was a racist.
He did the only thing he could think of.
“Kendreague help, I need you.”
Josie had stepped between Matthan and Alexia. Kendreague was
there in seconds of Edan’s cry for help and that’s what it was.
“What in the name of ‘The Goddess’ is going on here?”
Kendreague yelled. Matthan dropped and bowed to him. Josie bowed her head. No
one answered. Kendreague was loosing his cool. Alexia noticed and spoke up.
“Kendreague, Matthan has been down right mean and nasty
about me being changed and that Edan and I are handfasting. He threatened to
kill me.”
“Matthan, what do you have to say for yourself?” Kendreague
asked.
“Nothing your highness; I’m sorry my views are not the ones
you like.” “Explain now!” he commanded. Kendreague had known Matthan for
several years and never thought he would act like this.
“I do not think humans should have been enfolded into the
prediction. It is wrong and I do not like it.” Matthan said.
“I think I need Brina here for this.” He linked and Brina
flew to him.
“Brina dear this is Matthan, a friend of Edan’s, or so we
thought. Matthan explain to ‘The Maiden’ now!” Matthan explained and Brina
listened.
“Alexia, are you hurt by his thoughts?”
“I’m not hurt, I just think friends should understand and be
happy when you’re happy. He is wrong in his thoughts but I know I can’t change
them.” She told Brina.
“And who might this be?” Kendreague finally realized Josie
was still bowed.
“This is my best friend Josie, she’s human!” Alexia
emphasized the human part. Matthan made a snarling sound. Brina lost her cool
and sent power through him.
“The law is clear, Matthan has been disrespectful to one of
us and made a threat to kill her and he is unwilling to change his views. He
must be punished.” Brina stated.
“You can punish me if you want but that won’t change
anything.” Matthan said.
“Alexia, what’s going to happen to him?” Josie asked not
knowing what the law said.
“Death is what the law calls for in this situation unless
someone can stand up for him and mean it.” Kendreague stated. Edan shook his
head no and Alexia did the same. Josie stood there a moment looking at Matthan.
“I will stand up for him.”
“You’re human, what do you care if I die or not?”
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